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outsider's avatar

Exactly!... like this...

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Peter Shepherd's avatar

Awesome. The structure is viscerally effective.

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Rob Lewis's avatar

Thank you, Peter!

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Julie Gabrielli's avatar

Beautiful in both content and form.

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Rob Lewis's avatar

Thanks, Julie!

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Lisa Gruwell Spicer's avatar

Yes. In times like these, only poetry makes sense.

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Roselle Angwin's avatar

Rob, what a very fine poem. Zen quality to it. Love the last 4 lines in particular – standalone. Good image to accompany it, too.

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Rob Lewis's avatar

Thanks, Roselle!

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